Dear Patrick,

I have recently attended your concert, and I am writing this to express how your performance has left me awestruck. The show you put on was phenomenal, and your vocals made me speechless. It was a magical experience, and I am glad I witnessed it live. 

I am a backing vocalist and a pianist for a band that I put together recently. We aspire to become a professional band as well as gain global recognition, reaching people in every corner of the world with our music. Furthermore, I write songs for an album we are producing on our own. I must say, you have been an inspiration for me in my musical endeavors.

I am sure you have a tight schedule but if it is not asking too much, I request you to share some tips and provide feedback on the music I made so far. I would appreciate it if you could guide me to improve my vocal capabilities.

I hope to receive your mentorship. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Jack Dugard